The Frosty winter poem by my granddaughter. ๐ŸŒน

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My granddaughter came to see us today along with her mum, dad and little brother holding a piece of folded paper saying “Grandma I’ve written another poem”ย She then stood in the middle of the room to read it to us:

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The Frosty Winter.

Cold winds burns your little face

Blustery breezes sway back and forth

A Robbin with a burning breast

Fields as white as a snow leopard

Snowy air as cold as an iceย cube

But a blood red orange sun sparkles in my eye.

By Ruby aged 9

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I thought it was very descriptive, with a good choice of words. She wanted me to put it on my site to see if she gets any likes ๐Ÿ˜‰

30 Comments on “The Frosty winter poem by my granddaughter. ๐ŸŒน

  1. Well, that little apple didn’t fall far from the tree, Elaine! I especially love the imagery of the first line. ๐Ÿ˜‰ xoxoM

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  2. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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  3. Tell her it’s lovely and that she should continue writing and sharing with us. Hugs and blessings for her ๐Ÿค—

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  4. What a delight! Her imagery is delightful. She sees so much. It’s amazing! what children take note of. Following in grandma’s footsteps?! I think so. I’d be delighted to read more.

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  5. That’s beautiful, Elaine – well done Ruby! (PS My youngest granddaughter is also called Ruby) ๐Ÿ™‚ x

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  6. Somebodyโ€™s vying for that spot in Grandmaโ€™s world. ๐Ÿ˜Š”Lovely poem Ruby, give Grandma a run for her money”๐Ÿ˜˜

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  7. What a super poem Ruby, I think you’re very clever and hope to see more of your poetry on Grandma Elaine’s blog. Elaine you must be chuffed to bits, it’s lovely ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ’œ

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  8. It’s beautiful Elaine!!
    She’s gifted!!
    I loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

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