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The Frosty winter poem by my granddaughter. 🌹
My granddaughter came to see us today along with her mum, dad and little brother holding a piece of folded paper saying “Grandma I’ve written another poem” She then stood in the middle of the room to read it to us:
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The Frosty Winter.
Cold winds burns your little face
Blustery breezes sway back and forth
A Robbin with a burning breast
Fields as white as a snow leopard
Snowy air as cold as an ice cube
But a blood red orange sun sparkles in my eye.
By Ruby aged 9
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I thought it was very descriptive, with a good choice of words. She wanted me to put it on my site to see if she gets any likes 😉
30 Comments on “The Frosty winter poem by my granddaughter. 🌹”
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Well, that little apple didn’t fall far from the tree, Elaine! I especially love the imagery of the first line. 😉 xoxoM
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I think she will be far better than me! I think it’s good but then I am biased 😉
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😆💗💗💗💗👍👍👍👍👍
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Tell her it’s lovely and that she should continue writing and sharing with us. Hugs and blessings for her 🤗
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So good ! You have a poet on ur hands !
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Thanks I try to encourage her 🙂
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What a delight! Her imagery is delightful. She sees so much. It’s amazing! what children take note of. Following in grandma’s footsteps?! I think so. I’d be delighted to read more.
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Thanks Phyllis 😊
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It’s so true, Elaine. I thoroughly enjoyed her poem. I wouldn’t say so otherwise.
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I know and that means a lot 🌹
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You must have had the best time! It would have tears glistening on my cheeks both for joy and delight.
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Wow tell her that it’s absolutely amazing! 🙂
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Thanks I will do. 😁
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You’re welcome! It must be nice to have such a talented granddaughter. You must be really proud 🙂
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Absolutely 😊
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That’s beautiful, Elaine – well done Ruby! (PS My youngest granddaughter is also called Ruby) 🙂 x
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I think she did great – give her a high 5 from me! Great job!
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I think we should be looking out for Ruby in the poetry world – great job! 🙂
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Somebody’s vying for that spot in Grandma’s world. 😊”Lovely poem Ruby, give Grandma a run for her money”😘
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Wow. Elaine, it’s wonderful. Written by your 9 year-old grandkid. She is talented. She’ll be a poet!!
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I hope so , thank you 😊
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There is a publisher that publish kids poems. We paid to have our daughter’s poem included in it one year.
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What a super poem Ruby, I think you’re very clever and hope to see more of your poetry on Grandma Elaine’s blog. Elaine you must be chuffed to bits, it’s lovely 😊 💜
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She amazes me, I would love her to do more. She told her teacher that I do lots of poems online and the teacher asked her how she could find them 😳
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Ha ha out of the mouths of babes 😉 I think you should have a Ruby section on you blog 😊
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That’s a great idea, I don’t want to put pressure on her though I want it to flow naturally . I will make a section for her. Thanks Liza 🙂
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It could be her creative space, so she can share poems, pictures and anything she likes, then not so much pressure to write the perfect poem 😊
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Great idea, I’ve made her a place on my top menu 😁
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Fabulous, let us know what she says when you tell her 😊
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It’s beautiful Elaine!!
She’s gifted!!
I loved it 🙂
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