Will peace ever find you
will your mind ever ย rest
will your memories fade
with the time you invest
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will your heart stop racing
will your eyes shine again
will you ever start smiling
With the confidence you gain
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Will your soul start rejoicing
will your spirit fly free
will contentment ever find you
when you are set free.
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Yes all the wills are answered in the last line of the para.
An asking of a sort.
To go into the deeper self.
All to gain.
Elaine!๐
Shiva
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I had not thought of that when I wrote it but I can see what you mean, the positive comes through at the end of each paragraph unconsciously, great eh! ๐
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Lovely. Is this from a personal perspective? It makes me think of your own past and finally finding your match.
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It’s a strange one, I read someone’s post which saddened me, but bits of me leak out in my writing ๐ณ There is no hiding place on here ๐โจ
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I agree with amileinmyshoes, it seems apropo
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Same reply as I gave to amileinmyshoes ๐
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Soul searching words. Wonderful.
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Thanks, now my soul is weary! Too much soul searching today ๐
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It looks like questions you ask someone who has just found love. Haha. ๐
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Yes I will! Lovely poem Elaine x
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โค๏ธโจ๐น
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I read it as I and me and loved it even more!!
Yes you will
You have already found
Parts of joy by writing this
The jigsaw will solve
And you will have a clear picture soon
Amen!!
I loved it
Have a great day ahead!!
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You are sooooo wise ๐ฆ
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Thanks Elaine!!
Much love and respect ๐
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This is lovely poem… loved every bit of it …hats off to you..
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Many thanks ๐
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My pleasure
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Hey! Post reading your current posts it makes me wonder if it’s a question asked to the guilty person or to the one who is hurt. Either way I feel everyone should be set free and be happy. Some in realisation and making sure learning happens and some in learnings that already happened and the new open door awatis new learnings ๐
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Everyone makes their own interpretation, there is no right or wrong way. Thanks for your comment ๐
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