Endings. 🌹

07/01/2017 Elaine Poetry 21 comments

When I search your eyes

its clear to see

that you no longer feel

any love for me

when I listen to you speak

its plain to hear

you don’t really want

to have me near

when I feel your touch

it doesn’t feel right

it doesn’t feel gentle

it doesn’t feel light

when you kiss my lips

which is very rare

my heart feel lost

my soul feels bare.

💔

21 comments

Covert Novelist says:

07/01/2017 at 8:24 am

Isn’t that the truth of the matter.

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1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
  
  07/01/2017 at 8:26 am
  
  I was laid in bed this morning and the words started in my head and I said to John, I must get up and write some words down NOW, he said, I understand, I do love him. 😊
  
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  1. Covert Novelist says:
    
    07/01/2017 at 8:31 am
    
    He’s a pretty precious sort! You are lucky and so is he! to have found each other.
    
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    1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
      
      07/01/2017 at 8:35 am
      
      I know I am so very lucky to have found John, I am a free spirit and not many men have the confidence to deal with that. Also he is an excellent communicator which enables him to deal with the strange things I come out with. …and takes it all with a pinch of salt.
      
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      1. Covert Novelist says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 8:36 am
        
        That’s pretty special.
        
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        Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 8:38 am
        
        I know, I prayed long and hard for someone like John to appear, there were not many I came in to contact with like that. He has such strong principles and morals too. If he saw this he would be embarrassed haha ❤️
        
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        Covert Novelist says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 9:33 am
        
        You found a keeper, bless you and John. I’ve been sick with a cold bad one so I’m up and down and write when I can xoxo Liza has one too
        
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        Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 9:45 am
        
        Sorry to hear that, keep warm, your honey and lemon recipe worked well for me 🙂
        
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        Covert Novelist says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 9:51 am
        
        I’ve been using for 2 days and the only reason I can breath. My throat isn’t as sore today and I am breathing better so that’s a relief.
        
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        Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
        
        07/01/2017 at 9:53 am
        
        That’s good, it must approx 2am there now, you need your rest 🙂
        
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rugby843 says:

07/01/2017 at 9:02 am

Cool guy you have!

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1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
  
  07/01/2017 at 9:02 am
  
  ❤️😊🌹
  
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atmadvaar says:

07/01/2017 at 9:34 am

Awww so sweet Elaine.
Luv it.

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1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
  
  07/01/2017 at 9:47 am
  
  😊
  
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  1. atmadvaar says:
    
    07/01/2017 at 9:57 am
    
    Njoy your weekend.
    Regards 🙂
    
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Sue says:

08/01/2017 at 11:00 pm

I can feel the emptiness. So glad that is no longer your reality.

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1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
  
  12/01/2017 at 9:59 pm
  
  Me too Sue, me too 🌹
  
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Patricia says:

12/01/2017 at 9:51 pm

This is beautiful Elaine. Your words sound like some words I’ve said to my former husband, lol. 🙂

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Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:

12/01/2017 at 9:58 pm

Me too to my former husband 😊 I have him to thank for most of my inspirational posts 😉

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Covert Novelist says:

09/02/2017 at 4:13 am

I had to revisit this poem because it is so beautiful!

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1. Elaine's Bloggers Paradise says:
  
  09/02/2017 at 7:33 am
  
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